Remarks made on Sibelius VII
by Jorma Panula on 2-4-00.
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1. |
from bar
5 |
check the
parts, cresc. and dim. are missing. |
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2. |
A |
check
first violinparts, older material two f sharps instead of one. |
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3. |
6 after A |
strings
are too loud, change to p. |
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4. |
8 after A |
second
vl. dim. and mp misprint, also second half of the bar first half of the
section should go octave down. |
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5. |
8 before
B |
cb arco. |
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6. |
8 before
B |
I think
the poco a poco meno p is mentioned
too soon here. |
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7. |
7 before
B |
cb last
e-flat tight to next bar like vc. |
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8. |
5 before
B |
cb last f
tight to next bar. |
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9. |
B |
poco a poco meno p means cresc al mf in 10 after B. |
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10. |
2 after B |
vl I both
parts, last a is tight with next bar. |
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11. |
6 after B |
in both
vla parts, b tight to next bar. |
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12. |
10 after
B |
cb after
g go one octave down until pizz 4
before C. |
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13. |
10 after
B |
last e
flat in cb tight to f in next bar. |
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14. |
7 before
C |
vl I
first part last a is tight with b and c in next bar. |
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15. |
7 before
C |
vla, last
doublestop is tight with next c. |
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16. |
7 before
C |
vc, last
f is tight with g and a. |
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17. |
7 before
C |
cb, last
f is tight with first g. |
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18. |
2 before
C |
misprint
in cb, like vc and fg f and e. |
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19. |
2 before
C |
hrn III
no cresc, also 1 after C. |
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20. |
1 before
C |
hb II, no
accents, also first and second bar in C |
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21. |
C |
vl I in parts double g, instead of a, g. |
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22. |
6 after C |
take cb one octave lower from g until 4 before
D e. |
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23. |
6 before
D |
add trb
II to hear triplets in trb I. |
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24. |
2 before
D |
hrn I,
add cresc. |
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25. |
4 before
E |
hrn IV, mf on 3. |
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26. |
3 before
E |
hb and
hrns legato, hrns I and III also legato 2 before E. |
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27. |
2 before
E |
vl II
play also f sharp on first beat otherwise vl I too weak. |
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28. |
1 before
E |
vla II
and vc II cresc and trem on second
half of the bar. |
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29. |
3 after E |
thema in vla I. |
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30. |
4 after E |
hear vorschlag in vl I. |
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31. |
5 after E |
fg p. |
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32. |
4 before
F |
hrn IV
solo. |
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33. |
1 before
F |
vl I,II
and vc, hear syncopation. |
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34. |
3 after F |
cb cue. |
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35. |
1 before
G |
in parts
is written a tempo, should be in
score. |
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36. |
3 after G |
meno adagio, should be in score. |
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37. |
2 after G |
molto dim to pp in
third bar for strings. |
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38. |
3 after G |
reinforce
hrn IV with soft low c in cello until 7 after G. |
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39. |
6 before
H |
listen to
last notes in violins, never loud enough. |
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40. |
H |
vla p. |
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41. |
4 after H |
hrn IV
important. |
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42. |
1 before
I |
f sharp
in cbII important. |
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43. |
3 after I |
change
last cord in strings, vc II play c-major c g e c (IV III II I) vc I only d
(II), vlaII c g d b(IV III II I), vlaI c g
e b, vl II second partg d b, vlII first part g e d, vlI first and
second part g d b-flat g. |
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44. |
5 after I |
hb and cl
mp. |
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45. |
6 after I |
fl and fg
mp and pay attention to rhytm, play
like quarter triplet! |
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46. |
16 after
I |
vl I and
vc mf. |
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47. |
18 after
I |
fl and fg
f. second fg should also play here. |
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48. |
6 after I |
remark
the increase of dynamic from every entrance in fl and fg from 6 after I mp, 10 after I mf, 14 after poco f and
18 after f, 3 before J ff. |
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49. |
4 before
J |
check a
naturel in first hb (corrected later in score). |
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50. |
J |
misprint
in score, vl II, vla, vc dim
instead of cresc. |
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51. |
10 after
J |
vc last
two notes important! |
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52. |
14 after
J |
winds
take mf, two bars later meno=mp. |
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53. |
14 before
K |
strings p. |
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54. |
13 before
K |
cresc to ff
in next bar. |
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55. |
10 before
K |
vl II,
vla, vc mp and cresc to ff in next
bar. |
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56. |
9 before
K |
vl I mf and cresc to ff. |
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57. |
6 before
K |
take mf in winds. |
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58. |
8 after K |
in vl I
second part should be g natural. |
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59. |
10 after
K |
strings
missing cresc to f jn next bar. |
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60. |
11 after
K |
winds mf. |
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61. |
14 before
L |
strings p on second quarter, downbow and up12
before K. |
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62. |
1 before
L |
trb I, cantabile. |
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63. |
L |
trb II
not marcato. |
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64. |
L |
vl II
check parts for first note,g not b-flat. |
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65. |
2 after L |
trI mp, trb I pp. |
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66. |
5 after L |
fg, hrns
II, IV accent on low c. |
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67. |
7 after L |
trp II,
III mp. |
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68. |
5 before
M |
trp II,
trb II, III no cresc, theme starts
here and goes to trp I, trb I. |
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69. |
4 before
M |
trp II,
do not play second half of the bar. |
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70. |
3 before
M |
trp I,
trb I breath after first note. |
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71. |
2 before
M |
trp I,
III, trb I, III take breath after second note. |
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72. |
1 before
M |
trp I,
trb I take breath before M. |
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73. |
M |
trp III, trb III second half of the bar very
soft, otherwise disturbs melody in trp I, trb I. |
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74. |
2 after M |
trb f is
too loud for melody in horns I, III. |
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75. |
2 after M |
trp I,
trb I take breath after second beat. |
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76. |
5 before
N |
pk e
natural! |
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77. |
3 before
N |
vl I
first part have b sharp instead of b, also cresc is missing. |
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78. |
3 before
N |
hrns no dim and no p next bar, trps, trbs play fp
on last note. |
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79. |
1 before
N |
hrns too
loud, change to p. |
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80. |
1 before
N |
str mf.
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81. |
2 after N |
vl I
accent on first note. |
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82. |
2 after N |
trb too
weak, take mf. |
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83. |
3 after N |
keep hrns
down. |
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84. |
13 after N |
fl, fg cantabile, non stacc. |
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85. |
14 before
O |
trps,
trbs no cresc, hrn important. |
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86. |
11 before
O |
str
bowing; down,down up down, upbeat vl in next bar again down. |
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87. |
9 before
O |
no dim in str. |
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88. |
O |
take
little break before. |
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89. |
9 after O |
fl, hb stacc on second quarter. |
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90. |
2 after P |
fl f, low
and should be heard. |
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91. |
7 after P |
fl, hb cresc continues in next bar. |
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92. |
9 after P |
cl one
bow over the next two bars. |
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93. |
11 after
P |
fl have
mistake in parts, correct as in vl. |
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94. |
11 after
P |
vl mf. |
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95. |
11 after
P |
check vla
parts for wrong notes, bad notation. |
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96. |
14 after
P |
vc, cb up
on last e tight with next g (missing in cb, but should play), stacc on next two eight notes. |
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97. |
14 after
P |
wind last
tight with first of next bar. |
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98. |
14 after
P |
poco f on first beat for fl, vl I, II, vla. |
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99. |
12 before
Q |
str pp, cl important. |
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100. |
8 before
Q |
fl, acc
in fl II melody, not in fl I, also 6 before Q. |
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101. |
8 before
Q |
str mf. |
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102. |
6 before
Q |
hb II
also acc. |
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103. |
5 before
Q |
wind dim, no acc, last note should have a
dot. |
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104. |
3 before
Q |
hrns no dim and no p next bar, trps, trbs play fp
on last note. |
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105. |
Q |
listen vl
I first part f ! start up for pizz. |
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106. |
Q |
pk muta in
des-dur. |
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107. |
2 after Q |
hrns p last note. |
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108. |
6 after Q |
trb mp. |
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109. |
7 after Q |
vl I mf without acc but with dim on next whole bar. |
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110. |
8 after Q |
dolce e poco a poco, means dim untill 5 before R (dim
over 6 bars). |
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111. |
5 before
R |
listen to
harmony in vc, cb pizz (vibr!). |
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112. |
5 before
R |
vla
second part not too strong, you kneed to hear the c-sharp in the first part,
same in the following bars. |
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113. |
7 after R |
pk muta
in es-dur. |
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114. |
8 before
S |
cb vibr. |
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115. |
4 before
S |
vl I, vc mf. |
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116. |
4 before
S |
vl I,vc
start down, next bar last note has a dot. |
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117. |
S |
str up,up down(for 3 quarters)up down,next
bar, up up down.(eight notes no dots). |
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118. |
5 after S |
vl
connect last quaver to the first in next bar. |
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119 |
7 after S |
vl start
up and down in the dim.(don't
change together). |
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120. |
6 before
T |
vla mf, melody. |
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121. |
6 before
T |
fg play c
sharp on first beat like vla ( same register, but without appogiatura), no p, but mf. |
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122. |
3 before
T |
dim signs are missing in vl I parts, also cresc is missing. |
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123. |
1 before
T |
vl two
down bows, one up. |
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124. |
T |
vl I take
up on last quarter and connect with first in next bar, 3 after T up. 7 after
T mf, start up and down not
together for dim. |
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125. |
5 after T |
hb pp. |
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126. |
6 after T |
cl dots
on eights notes. |
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127. |
9 after T |
cb pizz vibr. |
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128. |
9 before
U |
vl I, cl
already dim in second half of the
bar. |
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129. |
8 before
U |
vc mf. |
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130. |
4 before
U |
vc, up
eight notes tight to next bar, same for cl. |
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131. |
2 before
U |
fl
connect eight notes to next bar. |
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132. |
U |
Winds,
connect to first note in next bar. |
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133. |
U |
vl I, vc,
cb( b-flat missing in second bar) up on last quarter connect to first of next
bar. 3 bar up, last quarter down. |
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134. |
4 after U |
str p on second note, punta d'arco. |
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135. |
9 after U |
str mf. |
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136. |
9 after U |
fl II has
acc, not fl I. |
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137. |
11 after
U |
add acc
to hb II. |
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138. |
12 after
U |
winds no
acc, but dim, last note should have
a dot. |
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139. |
12 after
U |
str molto cresc on second half. |
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140. |
14 after
U |
pk still
tr. |
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141. |
13 before
V |
cl funny
key, but sounds allright. |
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142. |
11 before
V |
vl up, 10
before vc up, every time.(no cresc) |
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143. |
6 after V |
vl I, II mp. |
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144. |
5 before
W |
vc solo
should be soli.(earlier days small orchestra). |
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145. |
4 before
W |
trbs cue. |
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146. |
3 before
W |
winds mf.( no p in cl) |
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147. |
1 before
W |
winds cresc. |
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148. |
W |
vl up and
next bar down. |
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149. |
2 after W |
fl I
second note f. |
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150. |
6 after W |
str take
back after ff, to make cresc in second half. |
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151. |
10 after
W |
str punta d'arco and think 2x3. |
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152. |
9 after W |
until 4
before X is a small cresc, only to mp, all other markings are wrong. |
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153. |
3 before
X |
everybody
mp. |
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154. |
3 after X |
cb no poco f, gradual cresc. |
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155. |
4 after X |
trp II no
acc, also no acc 6 after. |
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156. |
4 after X |
vl I, II mf. |
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157. |
5 after X |
trb I cresc missing in part, no acc. |
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158. |
5 after X |
vla, vc
no f, gradual cresc! |
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159. |
7 before
Y |
fg c
loud. |
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160. |
6 before Y |
trb I mf, double with trb II. |
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161. |
4 before Y |
trp I take care high a, soft. |
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162. |
2 before Y |
hrn II, IV listen to vorschlag. |
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163. |
1 before Y |
hrn II, IV, play legato to first note of next bar, do'nt disturb melody with rythm. |
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164. |
1 before Z |
everybody plays dotted quarternote, subdivide last beat. |
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165. |
Z |
vl I second div play same as vl I first div, with vorschlag. |
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166. |
Z |
vl II second div play dotted half note, then again one quarter e. |
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167. |
Z |
all strings play first note down and then 3 seperate strokes, also next bar separate strokes. |
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168. |
2 after Z |
str mf. |
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169. |
5 after Z |
vl I second div, vl II second div, play half note, then one quarter c again, all seperate strokes. |
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170. |
10 after Z |
vl I first div again f-sharp. |
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171. |
6 before end |
pk should play d. |
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172. |
4 before end |
hrn I play like vl, then you can hear theme. |
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173. |
4 before end |
hrn II, IV like vla. |
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174. |
4 before end |
cb pizz vibr. |